Mudstar of Windclan

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Mudstar of Windclan

Post  Cinwan on Sun Aug 19, 2012 1:24 pm

Name: Mudstar
Gender: Male
Rank(EX: Warrior, apprentice, etc.): Leader
Age: 7 years
Physical Description(In writing or image form): A brown cat with gray streaks and green eyes. He has a scar across his muzzle and one of his ear tips are gone from a battle.
Personality: Mudstar doesn't get mad easily and trusts his warriors. He loves his mate, his kits, and his future kits. Mudstar has bad hearing and possibly could insult you due to misunderstanding. He is also sometimes stubborn and can be a little selfish when it comes to helping cats from other clans.
History*: Mudstar was a very happy kit when he was little and grew up as a very popular apprentice. He is a very good fighter and everyone in the clan liked him. He was appointed deputy when his leader was on his last life. Mudheart's leader was killed by a dog.
RPG Sample*: Mudstar's nose smelled a rabbit. "Foxpelt, I smell a rabbit over there. I'll walk over there on the other side of us and chase it to you." He nodded to his mate and did as he said.


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Re: Mudstar of Windclan

Post  Zaperex on Sun Aug 19, 2012 1:29 pm

Good, but don't forget to add negative personality traits as well, or your cat may turn out as a mary-sue. Fix, please. Wink
Plus, I don't understand the "A friendly cat that always listens to arguments" part. Can you clear that up with me?
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Re: Mudstar of Windclan

Post  Zaperex on Wed Aug 22, 2012 12:52 pm

You still haven't replied so I have to warn you, if this isn't fixed by the end of the week, it'll be moved into the inactive posts section.
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Re: Mudstar of Windclan

Post  Cinwan on Thu Aug 23, 2012 10:34 pm

I fixed him!
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Re: Mudstar of Windclan

Post  Zaperex on Fri Aug 24, 2012 10:27 pm

Accepted.
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