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Post  Shellystream on Thu Jul 26, 2012 5:11 pm

Name: Ribbonstream
Gender: she-cat
Rank(EX: Warrior, apprentice, etc.): Medicine cat (I still haven't given up! >Very Happy)
Age: 20 moons
Physical Description(In writing or image form): [Only admins are allowed to see this image]
Personality: Kind, fierce, loyal
History*: Ribbonstream was born into Shadow Clan and at first trained to be a warrior. But she was no good at it but had an interest in herbs. Then, she started training as a medicine cat
RPG Sample*: Ribbonstream padded into the forest, sniffing for any scent of herbs. Suddenly, a sweet smelling herb caught her attention. Ribbonstream trotted towards an old tree. She spotted a clump of catmint and picked it up.

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Re: Ribbonstream~

Post  Zaperex on Thu Jul 26, 2012 9:11 pm

First of all, cats don't know what ribbons are. Also, please increase her age, Jayfeather is 3 years old, Mothwing is 5.5, so I think she's a bit young to be a medicine cat. Once again, refer to personality (labeled as "2.") in my post on "Shatteredsoul".

No typos on the RPG sample this time though! Yay! Very Happy

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